Merge pull request MicrosoftDocs#596 from fbsolo/patch-21

Update crypt-gen-random-transact-sql.md

Author: GitHubber17

docs/t-sql/functions/crypt-gen-random-transact-sql.md

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ manager: "craigg"
 # CRYPT_GEN_RANDOM (Transact-SQL)
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-Returns a cryptographic random number generated by the Crypto API (CAPI). The output is a hexadecimal number of the specified number of bytes.
+This function returns a cryptographic, randomly-generated number, generated by the Crypto API (CAPI). `CRYPT_GEN_RANDOM` returns a hexadecimal number with a length of a specified number of bytes.
 
 ![Topic link icon](../../database-engine/configure-windows/media/topic-link.gif "Topic link icon") [Transact-SQL Syntax Conventions](../../t-sql/language-elements/transact-sql-syntax-conventions-transact-sql.md)
 
@@ -40,27 +40,27 @@ CRYPT_GEN_RANDOM ( length [ , seed ] )
 
 ## Arguments  
 *length*  
-The length of the number being created. Maximum is 8000. *length* is type **int**.
+The length, in bytes, of the number that `CRYPT_GEN_RANDOM` will create. The *length* argument has an **int** data type, and a value range between 1 and 8000. `CRYPT_GEN_RANDOM` returns NULL for an **int** value outside this range. 
 
 *seed*  
-Optional data to use as a random seed.  There must be at least *length* bytes of data. *seed* is **varbinary(8000)**.
+An optional hexadecimal number, for use as a random seed value. The length of *seed* must match the value of the *length* argument. The *seed* argument has a **varbinary(8000)** data type.
 
 ## Returned Types  
 **varbinary(8000)**
 
 ## Permissions  
-This function is public and does not require any special permissions.
+This function is public and it does not require any special permissions.
 
 ## Examples  
 
 ### A. Generating a random number  
-The following example generates a random number 50 bytes long.
+This example generates a random number of length 50 bytes:
 
 ```sql
 SELECT CRYPT_GEN_RANDOM(50) ;  
 ```  
 
-The following example generates a random number 4 bytes long using a 4-byte seed.
+This example generates a random number of length 4 bytes, using a 4-byte seed:
 
 ```sql
 SELECT CRYPT_GEN_RANDOM(4, 0x25F18060) ;