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_posts/2012-02-13-metro-dot-css-wrapup.md

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 * There are still a stack of tasks on the [trello board](https://trello.com/board/metro-css/4f2fd841a5146fa91fbff127) before we'd consider this a "done" project - I'd personally love to see the gh-pages template knocked up so more projects can use that (rather than the makeshift template we created that [a few are starting to use](http://signalr.net/))
 
 ##Contributors
-The turn out for metro.css has been - to say the least - disappointing. While it had a modest 36 votes, just three outside of the Code52 team turned up. We've had many declare that we're shooting ourselves in the foot for "restricting" ourselves to .NET or just Windows projects, this was the first project that had no platform restrictions... yet few showed up. While we won't say no to cross platform or an alternative project - it has been a bit discouraging, to continue pressing for cross platform projects as a focus.
+The turn out for metro.css has been - to say the least - disappointing. While it had a modest 36 votes, just three outside of the Code52 team turned up. We've had many declare that we're shooting ourselves in the foot for *restricting* ourselves to .NET or just Windows projects. This was the first project that had no platform restrictions... yet few showed up. As our first venture outside the .NET sandbox it was a bit discouraging, and we are looking at ways to get others involved beyond the suggestion step.
 
 ##Download
 You can view the documentation and grab all the relevant artifacts over at the [project page](http://code52.org/metro.css/)
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 ##Cool Stuff
-As we alluded to earlier, a lot of the metro.css pack was built on top of ideas from work done on the new look [code 52](http://code52.org) web site that @shifty and @aeoth worked hard on while @tobin was on a beach - take a look and give us some feedback!
+As we alluded to earlier, a lot of the metro.css pack was built on top of ideas from work done on the new look [code 52](http://code52.org) web site that [@shiftkey](http://twitter.com/shiftkey) and [@aeoth](http://twitter.com/aeoth) worked hard on while [@tobin](http://twitter.com/aeoth) was on a beach - take a look and give us some feedback!
 
 The development of metro.css so far has also given the opportunity to give a lot of feedback into our previous project [Pretzel](https://github.com/Code52/pretzel) as we used it to generate test sites.