DOCS-5932 clarify troubleshoot replica sets

Author: kay-kim

source/tutorial/troubleshoot-replica-sets.txt

@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ Socket Exceptions when Rebooting More than One Secondary
 
 When you reboot members of a replica set, ensure that the set is able
 to elect a primary during the maintenance. This means ensuring that a majority of
-the set's ':data:`~replSetGetConfig.members[n].votes` are
+the set's :data:`~replSetGetConfig.members[n].votes` are
 available.
 
 When a set's active members can no longer form a majority, the set's
@@ -200,11 +200,12 @@ attempting to write to the former primary receive socket exceptions
 and *Connection reset* errors until the set can elect a primary.
 
 .. example:: Given a three-member replica set where every member has
-   one vote, the set can elect a primary only as long as two members
-   can connect to each other. If two you reboot the two secondaries
-   once, the primary steps down and becomes a secondary. Until the at
-   least one secondary becomes available, the set has no primary and
-   cannot elect a new primary.
+   one vote, the set can elect a primary if at least two members
+   can connect to each other. If you reboot the two secondaries at
+   once, the primary steps down and becomes a secondary. Until at least
+   another secondary becomes available, i.e. at least one of the rebooted
+   secondaries also becomes available, the set has no primary and cannot
+   elect a new primary.
 
 For more information on votes, see :doc:`/core/replica-set-elections`. For
 related information on connection errors, see :ref:`faq-keepalive`.