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 [[administration]]
-= Administration, Monitoring and Deployment
+= Administration, Monitoring, and Deployment
 
 [partintro]
 --
-The majority of this book has been aimed at building applications using Elasticsearch
+The majority of this book is aimed at building applications by using Elasticsearch
 as the backend.  This section is a little different.  Here, you will learn
-how to manage Elasticsearch itself.  Elasticsearch is a very complex piece of
-software, with many moving parts.  There are a large number of APIs designed
+how to manage Elasticsearch itself.  Elasticsearch is a complex piece of
+software, with many moving parts.  Many APIs are designed
 to help you manage your Elasticsearch deployment.
 
-In this chapter, we will cover three main topics:
+In this chapter, we cover three main topics:
 
-- Monitoring your cluster's vital statistics, what behaviors are normal and which
-should be cause for alarm, and how to interpret various stats provided by Elasticsearch
-- Deploying your cluster to production, including best-practices and important
-configuration which should (or should not!) be changed
-- Post-deployment logistics, such as how to perform a rolling restart or backup
+- Monitoring your cluster's vital statistics, understanding which behaviors are normal and which
+should be cause for alarm, and interpreting various stats provided by Elasticsearch
+- Deploying your cluster to production, including best practices and important
+configuration that should (or should not!) be changed
+- Performing post-deployment logistics, such as a rolling restart or backup of
 your cluster
 --