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 ## Introduction
 
-This post is from Gareth, who found the Code52 chatroom by chance. When we announced the "Show and Tell" week, he put together a post about what he does for a living and what [he's been learning in his spare time](http://garfbradazweb.wordpress.com/2012/04/16/code52-show-tell-my-open-source-application/).
+This post is from Gareth Bradley, who found the Code52 chatroom by accident while he was checking out [JabbR](http://jabbr.net/). When we announced the "Show and Tell" week, he wrote a post about what he does for a living and what [he's been learning in his spare time](http://garfbradazweb.wordpress.com/2012/04/16/code52-show-tell-my-open-source-application/).
 
-I share the same view as Gareth in that I **learn best by building something useful** - and Gareth's put together his own OSS project to demonstrate his learning.
+I share the same view as Gareth in that I **learn best by building something useful** - and Gareth's put together his own OSS project as a way to demonstrate what he's learned.
 
-The project code is at [mvcimage.codeplex.com](http://mvcimage.codeplex.com/), and I hope to see more stuff from him in the future.
+The project code is at [mvcimage.codeplex.com](http://mvcimage.codeplex.com/), and I hope to see more cool stuff from him in the future.
 
 ## About the Author
 
-Gareth is a 4GL applications developer for OpenVMS systems by day and learns various other technologies (including C#, C++, XNA and ASP.NET) by night. You can find his blog at [garfbradazweb.wordpress.com/](http://garfbradazweb.wordpress.com/) and he isn't on Twitter (but probably should be).
+Gareth Bradley is a 4GL applications developer on OpenVMS systems by day and learning various other technologies (including C#, C++, XNA and ASP.NET) by night. You can find his blog at [garfbradazweb.wordpress.com/](http://garfbradazweb.wordpress.com/) and he's also on Twitter as [@garfbradaz](http://twitter.com/garfbradaz).